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whadu Level 47: Snake Eater

 Posts: 31396Timestamp: Sun Apr 13, 08 11:21 PM
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| Ragedy wrote: | I'm not going to lie to you, that wasn't funny
But to your credit it was better than Broken Comics, though an empty page would have been an improvement over that crap all the same. |
Maybe it's because you weren't in it. I have a plot for you in the next one. ___
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Ragedy Level 31: Sheng Long

 Posts: 6197Timestamp: Sun Apr 13, 08 11:26 PM
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The best part about criticizing other people's work on here is that I've never written anything for them to criticize.
HAH! ___
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2cool2spy Level 30: Knee Breaking Evil

 Posts: 5713Timestamp: Sun Apr 13, 08 11:31 PM
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rocker23220 Level 24: Sore Fingers

 Posts: 2690Timestamp: Sun Apr 13, 08 11:35 PM
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Omg, that was awesomely awesome. Especially that ending. This is gonna be fun to read ___
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Sarahwearamascara Level 12: Freedom Fighter

 Posts: 370Timestamp: Sun Apr 13, 08 11:55 PM
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| whadu wrote: | | Ragedy wrote: | I'm not going to lie to you, that wasn't funny
But to your credit it was better than Broken Comics, though an empty page would have been an improvement over that crap all the same. |
Maybe it's because you weren't in it. I have a plot for you in the next one. | Haha you torched his ass. Whadu torched his ass. Lol
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GreenTeaHippie Level 23: Metal Slug

 Posts: 2373Timestamp: Sun Apr 13, 08 11:58 PM
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| Sarahbearah05 wrote: | | whadu wrote: | | Ragedy wrote: | I'm not going to lie to you, that wasn't funny
But to your credit it was better than Broken Comics, though an empty page would have been an improvement over that crap all the same. |
Maybe it's because you weren't in it. I have a plot for you in the next one. | Haha you torches his ass. Whadu torched his ass. Lol |
...what? |
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Sarahwearamascara Level 12: Freedom Fighter

 Posts: 370Timestamp: Mon Apr 14, 08 12:01 AM
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| GreenTeaHippie wrote: | | Sarahbearah05 wrote: | | whadu wrote: | | Ragedy wrote: | I'm not going to lie to you, that wasn't funny
But to your credit it was better than Broken Comics, though an empty page would have been an improvement over that crap all the same. |
Maybe it's because you weren't in it. I have a plot for you in the next one. | Haha you torches his ass. Whadu torched his ass. Lol |
...what? | its a quote from family guys. Peter says it to meg. |
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Super_Sonic Level 31: Sheng Long

 Posts: 6448Timestamp: Mon Apr 14, 08 1:50 PM
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That was great. :laugh: ___ "I thought you might be worried, about the security...of your shit."
It was electric, so frighteningly hectic.
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Zerograv Level 26: Holy Knight

 Posts: 3904Timestamp: Mon Apr 14, 08 6:53 PM
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