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MadSkillz
Level 38: Crackdown
Posts: 12459Timestamp: Sat May 24, 08 1:05 PM
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You guys remember the first episode right? Here is a different take on it. Hope you guys enjoy.
| Quote: | An office building is shown with the words "Psyche Corporation" on it.
[ MadSkillz is shown in his office, organizing the pens on his desk ]
(interview) Mad: Here at Psyche, we sell blue and black ink pens, so business always comes first.
[ A closer look shows Mad using the pens as wrestling action figures ]
(interview) Mad: Okay it was a cage match with my pens..
[ A shriek is heard from Mad's office. The employees quickly gather around his door.]
[ the door slowly opens to reveal the pens have exploded and have stained the walls ]
[ everyone stares at Mad, who is soaked in pen ink ]
Mad: What are you guys looking at? Can't you see my blue pen has just Stone Cold Stunner'd my black pen.
[ Whadu comes up behind Mad and pats him on the back]
Whadu: Leave him be, EVERY GET BACK TO WORK.
Mad: Thanks whads, this is why you're in charge!
Whadu: No problem Mad, now get out there and Superly Vice all those faggots.
[ Mad skips along merrily while whadu is on the floor laughing]
(interview) Mad: I didn't know why he was laughing, but it totally geared me up. My back is itchy.
[ Cursed is shown at his desk ]
[ BigN walks up ]
BigN: So hows the computer working? Good i hope since whadu appointed me as "official computer guy fixer" i think i've been doing a good job.
[ Cursed throws his controller at his computer monitor ]
Cursed: SEE WHAT YOU DID?!
[ Cursed is shown being tea bagged by another player in Halo 2 ]
BigN: OH SHI-! We still coo Canadian homie?
[ Cursed and BigN shake on it ]
(interview) BigN: Cursed and I are close friends. I'm friends with most people in the office, but we share a special bond.
[ Cursed and BigN are seen passing out shirtless pictures of themselves around the office. ]
[ BigN gets to Monk, Sparkie, and Charlie ]
BigN: Here guys, have free sexy pictures!
Monk: Err, I can't. I really need to get Sparkie a report on how many blue and black pens we have sold. Plus i need-
BigN: ok shut up. How about you Sparkie?
Sparkie: Well uhh, i'm already done with my work. So why not?!
[ Sparkie quickly starts taking the pictures from BigN ]
BigN: Ummm..Sparkie..
[ Sparkie foams at the mouth as she continues to grab more shirtless pictures ]
BigN: Want any Charlie?
[ Charlie notices so29 jerking and fidgeting as he watches Sparkie grabs the pictures. ]
Charlie: Errr... umm no thanks..
BigN: Alright im gonna go copy some more. Also, its about that time of the day when Whadu starts his antics.
[ Cursed is shown passing out pictures of the other side of the office ]
Cursed: Here ya go Flash. One for you Brainfreeze. Don't be shy guys.
[ Cursed reaches SarahBear ]
Cursed: Hey Sarah, I was thinking about you and decided to give you this shirtless picture of mine!
SarahBear: Oh WOW! thanks!
[ Cursed snickers as he walks away ]
(interview) SarahBear: I...LIKED the picture alot. What i liked more is that it gave me an idea.
[ Cursed is shown settling back into his desk. ]
[ Cursed over hears part of a loud conversation ]
whadu: SHUT UP. GO UPGRADE OUR COMPUTERS OR SOMETHING STUPID SMART BOY WHO FIXES ALL OF OUR TECHNICAL PROBLEMS. WHAT, DID YOU JUST FINISH REMOVING A VIRUS OFF OF DESMOND'S COMPUTER BECAUSE HE CONTANTLY VISITS PORN SITES THAT GIVE PEOPLE VIRUSES LIKE A DUMBASS?
BigNig: ....NO. BUT THAT WAS PRETTY CLOSE.
[ Cursed begins to laugh, and looks at GreenTea ]
[ GreenTea laughs back and smiles at Cursed ]
[ whadu looks at Cursed and begins to squint ]
whadu: I'm watching you, Cursed.
[ An awkward silence falls when..]
Loud Voice: ....OH, CUMMED! AHAHAHA!
[ Whadu storms into his office ]
[ Cursed heads over to greenteas desk]
Cursed: Free shirtless pic?
Greentea: No thanks
Cursed: SO FUNNY STORY. I gave one of these to Sarah, and she actually thought I took the picture FOR her.
GreenTea: Did you really do that??
Cursed: Yep, and it was so funny.
[ GreenTea is shown laughing ]
[ whadu walks out of his office with his shirt off and looks at Cursed ]
whadu: CURSED. YOU THREATEN MY PEOPLE WITH SLAVERY AND DEATH!
[ Cursed rips off his shirt ]
Cursed: MY CHEST HAIRS CRAVE BATTLE!
[ SarahBear rips off her shirt and bra (breasts are censored) ]
SarahBear: THIS. IS.
[ WeedTeaHippie is shown doing an "Objection!" pose ]
WeedTeaHippie: OBJECTION!
[ The End image appears ]
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whadu
Level 47: Snake Eater
Posts: 31346Timestamp: Sat May 24, 08 1:29 PM
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While I don't think it provides as many laughs as the original, what it reveals makes up for it. What I mean is that things are explained in this revisited version and make you go "So that's what lead to that."
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MadSkillz
Level 38: Crackdown
Posts: 12459Timestamp: Sat May 24, 08 1:32 PM
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You can never beat the original. I think this adds depth. Maybe next time i can add more funnies. Also i wanted to "give people bigger roles". This isn't a really serious kind of thing, just enjoy it.
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Cursed
Level 39: Paper Luigi
Posts: 13270Timestamp: Sat May 24, 08 4:57 PM
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I'm just happy it starred me. Nice job Mad, I'll see Psyche in a different light now.
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MadSkillz
Level 38: Crackdown
Posts: 12459Timestamp: Sat May 24, 08 5:10 PM
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| Cursed wrote: | | I'm just happy it starred me. Nice job Mad, I'll see Psyche in a different light now. |
Yep, each one will be from a different perspective. You happen to be a good one i could roll with. And i promise you guys they will get better.
EDIT: One more thing. If you re-read the pilot. You'll see that the events match up perfectly.
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NativeTJ
Level 36: Rising Dragon
Posts: 10229Timestamp: Sun May 25, 08 3:18 AM
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Hey you actually have a good idea Mad. I liked the new perspective, like you said it gives the story more depth.
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ColorblindMonk
Level 26: Holy Knight
Posts: 3890Timestamp: Sun May 25, 08 11:09 AM
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LiLSpArKlEAngl13
Level 19: Smoke Out
Posts: 959Timestamp: Sun May 25, 08 5:16 PM
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MadSkillz
Level 38: Crackdown
Posts: 12459Timestamp: Mon May 26, 08 11:24 AM
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Thanks guys. i was expecting everyone to hate it.
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RogueMarie
Level 25: Twin Snakes
Posts: 3132Timestamp: Mon May 26, 08 10:07 PM
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| MadSkillz wrote: | | Thanks guys. i was expecting everyone to hate it. |
I hate it.
lol j/k
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