Posted On: Sat Sep 06, 08 8:43 AM
I just finished writing it... Here it is, I spell checked it myself =P
Dear Ms. Martha Twigg,
Hello Ms. Twigg, my name is Craig Warner. I am fourteen years old, and a member of Boy Scout Troop 22 Whitman, MA. I’m a Life Scout who is currently looking for an Eagle project.
One of my assistant scoutmasters, Donna Connors, talked to you about me possibly doing one for the Hanover Conservation Commission Project. Mrs. Connors described what kind of work I could possibly be doing with that project and I’m very interested to work with the Hanover Conservation Commission Project for my Eagle project.
I would like to meet with you sometime to discuss the project and anything you would like me to do. My phone number is ************ for when you would like to discuss the project with me.
Thank you
Craig Warner
hah... you all thought you were getting mai digets... >.>
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whadu
Level 49: GameShark
Sat Sep 06, 08 4:07 PM |
Very nice, there were only two things I could think of to make it better, unless you sent it in already.
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Swordemon
Level 24: Sore Fingers
Sat Sep 06, 08 5:44 PM |
Haven't sent it, any corrections are appreciated =D
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whadu
Level 49: GameShark
Sat Sep 06, 08 5:48 PM |
Hello Ms. Twigg, my name is Craig Warner.
Hello, my name is Craig Warner.
You've already addressed her by her name.
I am fourteen years old, and a member of Boy Scout Troop 22 Whitman, MA.
I am fourteen years old and a member of Boy Scout Troop 22 Whitman, MA.
You don't need a comma, and will connect your ideas.
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Swordemon
Level 24: Sore Fingers
Sat Sep 06, 08 9:58 PM |
ahh okay thanks whadu
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